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In my hair

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        in my hair

slowdown your kiss my love
we're not in the movies
tonight one kiss will do
slowdown your tears my love
even if they fall as rubies
they'll break the glass your looking through

cheat on me with your your boyfriend
some songs never end
as words forever change
the truth is we pretend
that the wounds will ever mend
love it wont get strange.

glitter in my hair fron your underwear
shooting star crash in my bed
we can blame the wine that graced our lips
but seven sips have sooner said

stayed in bed as you got dressed
on sunday youll confess
a sin of love and broken lore
beautifully depressed
my life is such a mess
heart and pants still on the floor

glitter in my hair from your underwear
tell your boyfriend i said hi
if your still out of breath
just nod and smile

you talk to me as you brush your teeth
until you fall asleep
your heart and dreams are silver lined
ahh but talk is cheap
and memories will keep
until I wake to find

glitter in my hair fron your underwear
shooting star crash in my bed
we can blame the wine that graced our lips
but seven sips have sooner said
glitter in my hair from your underwear
who cares if these words ryme
why must the people stop and stare
for a moment you where mine
glitter in my hair(for a moment you where mine)
glitter in my hair(for a moment you where mine)
glitter in my hair(for a moment you where mine)
glitter in my hair(for a moment you where mine)
Passing angels..
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sanpako's avatar
this is beautiful. I love the chorus in particular because it flows so nicely and you can just hear a tune with it, but the rest is all very nice too. it stays on topic which is amazing (poetry is so easy to drift off) and the images are just really solid the whole time. I like the "stayed in bed as you got dressed" because it's so relatable. you know the feeling of laying there, watching someone get ready.

this piece really has a sort of infused atomosphere. it definately gives you a feeling while you read it and I think it's a truely excellent song.